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Post by suroc on Apr 4, 2011 20:05:14 GMT -5
In wonder I was asked "who art tho" and I said unto them I am he who covets power. Locked away inside the unteetering chains of my dismal tower. Trapped inside looking out upon a blackened and appalling earth. I find myself looking into my heart of hearts searching for a warmer hearth. I am that which comes before a fall, gazing into that cracked and broken mirror, I hesitate I stall. Coming ever closer to seeing the machinations of an untethered life, never quite forgetting all the pain, pragmatic injustices that cause my eternal strife. I am he in which upon yester thought is stirred to lamentation, ever-ever more fueled by the insidious feeling of vexation. For ever in my minds eye will I be fluctuating odd, for all the woes that harass and plague my mind; there is a constant foundation Christ the Living God.
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Post by suroc on Apr 4, 2011 20:05:42 GMT -5
The way you laugh, the way you talk, it makes me smile. I know I love you because your always on my mind, my every thought of you makes me smile. I know it not infatuation, because I still am feeling elation. From the moment that I met you I know you were for me, you made me smile. When my day becomes to much to take, I just have to thank of you and I will never break. You make me smile.
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Post by suroc on Apr 4, 2011 20:06:58 GMT -5
I look back on yester year lamenting times forever clear, they are fleeting never here. Yester year is no more, my heart lies open, barely beating twas half torn, with such zeal I thought of bequieted shore, realizing they would be gone, coming never more.
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Faith Ackron
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Post by Faith Ackron on Apr 4, 2011 21:08:11 GMT -5
I suppose they are good. I was never a girl that dug poetry, or flowery worded things/words. I do like silly things such as: "Roses are red, Violets are blue, if you think I can drive it sure isn't true." That was from Gidget TV show. I guess that is why out of all three I prefer the second one. Short simple words. A fiver year old would have no real problem comprehending what is being said. No dictionary required!  Though the 'your' in the start of the second sentence should be spelled 'you're' for 'you are'. Sorry. Small errors like that get under my skin for some unknown reason. |
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Post by tlm9efant on Jun 15, 2011 11:52:35 GMT -5
(100,1,000,000 Federation Officers Cheering)  Amazing! |
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